Wednesday, December 2, 2009

Second Response :O

This is pretty good, but fix some of the spelling errors, because the spelling errors make some words look like other words and it gets confusing trying to figure the words out. Its good, except add some more information also, like who did you interview to get information, or did you already know this all.

looking back on new school skating #1

In the Early 1940's to 1950's skateboarding was a box or a plank of wood with rollerblade wheels on them. Then upon hitting california's big surfing crowd it took off in a whole new style all together. After 1965 the sport took its first fall. Rising again in the 70's thanks to polyurethane wheels offered a smoother ride. These wheels became known as the "Cadillac" of the sport. Since the 70's, the droupt in california made "vert" skating in 1976. The empty pools and parks started a whole new idea for skating bringing the dangert to the sport. Many of the shops closed up making the people create home ramps.
Today's generation is floodeed with new school skaters, Street wheels and skinny boards. Since the 1990's the style of skateboard has been pretty basic and the same. But loooking back id have to ask why they ever stopped the wave of surfstlye.